Tuesday 13 September 2016

Holly's persuasive writing: Why we should NOT eat bugs.


Eating bugs ?
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My point of view for eating bugs is to not . Don't eat bugs it's like saying " oh look there's a human , let's go eat him "  to be fair i don't want to be eaten . when you're reading this you're probably going " EWW why would people eat bugs " well i'm the same .  

Have you heard of Cricket flour well it's made out of Crickets * Surprise * well anyway crickets are 80% edible when you could be eatin Chicken ( Yum ) . Anyway Chicken is 50% edible which is pretty good and yum  . Also BEEF ( i like beef ) it is 40% edible , sorry beef lovers ( like me, i may have let you down . ) When i say 40% edible i mean when you buy some meat. the providers take out all of the yucky yucky stuff .

Don't you wonder who eats them well Thailand , Brazil , China , Australia , Japan , The Netherlands , Africa and USA all eat bugs , which i find . . . disgusting . Bugs just bugs don't you just get the chills . I do . . . Bugs could have diseases and they have legs and a head amgen those stuck in your teeth , plus if you think about it there's 1 cow that can last for days for more than 10 days but then bugs you need like 1,000 to make one person full . . . and wow that a lot don't you think . . . anyway dont you scream from a cockroach  , because i do .

Haven't you wondered how many bugs are alive , well i know that in usa there is 10,000,000,000,000,000,000 individual insects alive and yes that is 10 quintillion bugs ( i just got shivers. ) Dont you ever think some of the countries that eat bugs are poor . you're pretty lucky to live in such a good country that doesn't eat bugs we eat live stock from our own farms grown by kiwis our lovely country has us eating nice food not . . . bugs .  

When we are eating chocolate did you know that there's cocoa in it with is grown out side , so bugs could fly into the cocoa with is then but into chocolate . so we all do eat bugs . when we are walking around outside there could be bugs we could inhale bugs while we are outside . so if you dont do outside and dont eat chocolate in anything and dont eat bugs then you are safe . . . but they are coming for you . ha . . . ha just kidding , i hope .

What if you find a bug in the bath with you are you gonna eat it , or hop out of the bath . Just one simple question , are you gonna answer it ?

By Holly

2 comments:

  1. Isaac S
    I found this writing quite hard to understand as I am very used to formal writing instead of colloquial. It would be easier if your grammar and use of punctuation was correct and less haphazardly placed. Anyway I still found this piece of text interesting.

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  2. Hi Holly, that was great work. Although I am going for agree that we should eat bugs, I really like how you have stated your idea.

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